Not sure about the snare, sounds a little too "electronic/sampled" to me. The piano and bassline go really well together. Great job with the attack on the filter for the piano. Awesome vibe to the track, would love to hear a vocalist on it. The hi hats were introduced and eliminated at the perfect spots, so props for that. I also actually really the compressed kick, sounds great. Switch up the snare, and this track is a complete winner. Overall, it's great though.
Thanks for your feedback on mine!