maybe its just my taste, but im not a big fan of this track. it feels cheap on the production and the vocals are awkward and uncomfortable for me. i think the lyrics are vague and dont really make sense even in an abstract kind of way, they just seem a little surface level and "zany". The song is way too long for what it offers, and the lack of variation in the beat makes the companion hook blend in, resulting in a weaker track structure. overall the song feels unfocused and unrefined, almost like it was made in a day or two, which i have certainly done before haha, that's how i know. i think there is a good starting point here, and i remember listening to previous tracks of yours and thinking the same, like the ideas could be developed into something that's actually enjoyable AND artistic or abstract. try spending more time with your tracks, and listen to them again and again over a week or something like that, if you have access to people who can give you honest feedback hit them up too. at their current state the tracks are underwhelming, boring, and cheap-sounding. im not trying to be mean, im trying to do the same thing as you, getting my music heard and sharing it, but i also know that i want to be told the truth when my stuff is not up to par. keep on trying!
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