The commander [SoundCloud] [FEEDBACK PLEASE!]

[Anonymous321]

https://soundcloud.com/anonymous-rapper-920942585/the-commander
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hello futureproducers.com and users who seeing this .

here is my first trap music (and rap soon) that i want to sing on it .


please guide me and tell me this things :


score for melody : x\10


score for mix : x\10


score for mastering : x\10


score for feeling : x\10

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[Hbluntproductions]

The melody is really repetitive, the 808 is out of tune and very soft and lacks body, try some distortion. The mix needs a lot of work, levels, compression, the drums need reverb. Mastering wise i cant comment caus you cant master a bad mix. The vibe is nice and will be a sick beat if you just mix it well. There also doesnt seem to be much space for an artist, you need to make sure you can freestyle over the beat, there is way to much going on.

Please check this out.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...th-etc/feed4feed-change-boom-bap-beat-525785/

 

[Projectbeatz252]

dope

 

[Projectbeatz252]

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...tc/new-flames-va-nc-heat-project-beat-525792/ give me some feed back....sorrry that post was short but that beat is dope i would def love some shit like that for my album

 

[Anonymous321]

The melody is really repetitive, the 808 is out of tune and very soft and lacks body, try some distortion. The mix needs a lot of work, levels, compression, the drums need reverb. Mastering wise i cant comment caus you cant master a bad mix. The vibe is nice and will be a sick beat if you just mix it well. There also doesnt seem to be much space for an artist, you need to make sure you can freestyle over the beat, there is way to much going on.

Please check this out.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...th-etc/feed4feed-change-boom-bap-beat-525785/

i agree about mix and thanks alot for feed

 

[anaujiram]

melody 8/10

mix 7/10

mastering 8/10

Score feeling 8/10

Overall this a great beat mix could be improve but otherwise great concept .

Keep it up