Check this oldschool ghostface type joint!!!!! All feedback returned

Four seconds in, I immediately imagined Ghostface was ramblin' with the song as it comes in. With this rhythm when the beats [the numbers are the down beats]
"YAO. Ghost 1flexin' at the 2bodega. [3] Stretched 4paper. Rolex1, I'm no 2stranger. Bangers 3under the van [4] seat. 1Jake know I 2had heat, 3blast it make the 4whole street melt. [1] Like don't 2make me take 3off my belt [4]. Champi1ons. Hand 2standin' at the 3podium. It's 4Tony with the 1casserole. 2Goalie mask, 3basket Casey 4Jones." And so on, and so forth.

I personally would layer the snare with a slapper just 'cause that's how I'd like it, but your snare works. Or you know what, layer it with another rim shot, one with more mid. Ew I think I want to rap to this. You;d be my friend forever if you sent this thru to my website domain at gmail. Or whatever. Great job, my man.

Check me out tho https://www.futureproducers.com/for...bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/magic-elpins-504711/
 
Four seconds in, I immediately imagined Ghostface was ramblin' with the song as it comes in. With this rhythm when the beats [the numbers are the down beats]
"YAO. Ghost 1flexin' at the 2bodega. [3] Stretched 4paper. Rolex1, I'm no 2stranger. Bangers 3under the van [4] seat. 1Jake know I 2had heat, 3blast it make the 4whole street melt. [1] Like don't 2make me take 3off my belt [4]. Champi1ons. Hand 2standin' at the 3podium. It's 4Tony with the 1casserole. 2Goalie mask, 3basket Casey 4Jones." And so on, and so forth.

I personally would layer the snare with a slapper just 'cause that's how I'd like it, but your snare works. Or you know what, layer it with another rim shot, one with more mid. Ew I think I want to rap to this. You;d be my friend forever if you sent this thru to my website domain at gmail. Or whatever. Great job, my man.

Check me out tho https://www.futureproducers.com/for...bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/magic-elpins-504711/
Heres a downloadable (also better) version that I was going to send to Ghostface. lol

Heaven and Hell (My side of town)

And Ill get around to all yall music after a quick nap
 
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I flipped the same joint a while back, but a completely different way. This is dope! Could definitely hear Ghost tearin this up he is supposedly looking for beats for upcoming projects too. A Facebook friend posted this as the e-mail to send beats to, gfknewbiz@gmail.com I haven't sent anything yet, but I figured it can't hurt. Anyways, you made a real dope beat so keep doin your thing homie, if you have some time, please check out this joint I did with some homies of mine. Thanks. Peace.

Vinyl Villain

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...dirty-south-etc/new-summertime-banger-505710/
 
This is hot! I think the snare it a tad bit too bright making it not mesh with the beat as good as it could I would roll off a little bit of the high end and add just a slight reverb over it (or try a different rim shot). The reason why is b/c there little plucked strings hit on the 2 and 4 count, so that would add just the perfect amount of high even over the snare. I would also try to find a little part of the sample that could be used for a dope turn around so it doesn't get so repetitive in the verse part, but I do love when you brought in the vocal part in for the hook. Very dope beat, keep it up.
 
I think the beat is too long to have the same loop playing, maybe use some effects (people always go to the filter for that), or adding something/dropping something to make it less repetitive, or just making the beat shorter. I agree with the people talking about the snare, I think there needs more mid range thump there to get a more head knodding feel. I also wanna know about the baseline, kinda wanna learn it.

Feedback on one (or both of these) would be appreciated!!!
https://www.futureproducers.com/forum.../#post49924201
https://www.futureproducers.com/forum.../#post49924204
 
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