beginner Producer looking for feedback

[Bruce Luo]

Hey, this is one of my first beat I've made and was looking for some feedback. I don't have a producer tag yet so that's why there's that high pitched voice if you listen to my track.

Samplebeat by Bluto | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Mike McKeon]

Sounds good bruh, keep it up.

 

[optimist_music]

Sounds good man! You could switch up the melody a bit to make it a bit more interesting. Keep it up!

check mine out..... Grime Instrumental F4F

 

[JR Mastering]

The beat is pretty good but your bass is waaay too loud. It's complete running over the rest of the song and muddying it up. Your clap snare can't even cut through it.