Beat I made for my friend Need Feed. F4F

[Tdot0312]

Made this earlier today, I could use some feed on this. Will return the favor.

 

[arvindsg]

Interesting synths man, kind of reminds me of an 80's band, the transitions particularly that really loud high pitch synth don't really work in my opinion but I think if a rapper is good enough, it'll work. not bad at all

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https://soundcloud.com/arvindsg/hold-me-down-yurei-flip
I wanted to remix a song and make it something completely different. (F4F 100%)

 

[Tomzovic]

good job, i like that beat, i would like to hear someone rapping to it, would be interesting..

F4F:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...y-south-etc/rock-stuff-experiment-f4f-506382/

 

[IAMWVG]

Nice chord progression! You have a little techno sounding arp in there! You could stand to fatten up your clap a little, maybe bring the drums up a little, that flatline noise is a little loud, other than that, you have the makings of a very nice track here! https://soundcloud.com/will-vetter-goodin/drifting-away

 

[barbarian_dros]

It's a neat cinematic-style instrumental, what is that noise? The Boo sound from mario world?

 

[Tiscii]

Sounds video gamey.

https://soundcloud.com/tisci/mmamwigsmy-momma-ask-me-why-i-gotta-stuntdone

 

[Crate33]

I really like 'largeness' of the synths, but feel they could do with a key change / bridge-y gap. But I don't think the drums match the size of the synths. And the whole thing needs a good mastering.

Not a bad start though.

 

[BL3]

- Melodies are cool
- Overall mixing needs alot of work -- i would turn down the reverb on your instruments and the overall volume as well
- I would turn down the reverb on your snare and raise the volume of the snare
- The kick is drowned out too much by the instruments and again, by the reverb. Lower reverb and raise up in mix!
- The siren you used is too loud in the mix too

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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...lions-trap-beat-all-feedback-returned-506314/

Thanks!

 

[White Obama]

Sounds good man, I would do a couple things. Turn up the kick drum and definitely add in more claps. Check me out! https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/chill-hip-hop-beat-somebody-f4f-506496/

 

[producedbydylan]

I would get rid of all the sfx you've got, like the rising tremolo synth and the flatline, then you'll have yourself a decent beat. Also, the drums need to be louder, and more percussive elements need to be included to fill it out more. But other than that, this has potential!

https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../dylan-world-boom-bap-soul-sample-f4f-506490/

 

[TheArciDiavolo]

Props on putting this up. My advice is to focus more on rhythmic & progressions throughout instead of the EFX you have. The one you have that starts around 1:50 is great for example.

Good job overall!

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