this is some unique shit man, Im feelin it. I like the sounds you used for the most part, but I think the mixing could use some work. Hard for me to give detailed feedback on that because im using earbuds right now, but I would at least add some saturation or compression to the majority of your sounds to beef them up and excite them a little. Just sounds a little dry and empty, but I really think it's mostly a mixing thing and not a compositional issue (is that a word?) Anyway, keep it up and keep thinking outside the box.