Bad ******* - YJ Vasco f4f!!!

[yjvasco]

a new track i made...its me rapping over a beat i made...all done on my own...let me know what yall think, might make it to my next cd




as always feedback for feedback...lets get it

 

[ThreadyBeats]

The beat is hot. Your rapping isn't bad but I think you could a little more with a chorus. I personally like when a song has 2-3 choruses and either starts or ends with one.

 

[NeimanTyler]

both the mix and track are thin...try adding a bit more sounds...vocals are clean...not a fan of the chords and horns...good job overall...keep grinding.

 

[yjvasco]

@threadyBeats...thanks man, ill def look into that

@NeimanTyler.. for sure bro, ill keep that in mind...and will do, thanks

 

[DAHTrump]

Yeah vocals sound clear and the beat sounds like it can use better mixing with your voice. Overall sounds interesting and doesn't sound bad. It's great you can make your own beats and rap on them. That's a skill I wish I had. Keep moving forward, looking to hear great things from you in the future.

May I get your thoughts on this track? I'd love to hear what you think
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...xperimental-hip-hop-song-483108/#post49824366

 

[baes]

nice kick! tone of voice reminds me a little bit of kendrick. maybe try breaking up the flow into some triplets to help the energy level

 

[Bennbeats]

Dope man. Agree to the chorus thing mentioned before. but sounds cool man. especially the beat.

 

[yjvasco]

@DAHTrump thanks man...ill work on my mixing, and yeah...what Im able to do comes from God, blessed...i will def check out ur stuff right now

@baes thanks for checking it out...i will def keep that in mind as well...

@Bennbeats for sure man...thanks for checking it out, glad u liked the beat

 

[MrMcDowell]

I think the beat would be better with different sounds. I would try and expand your sounds some more. Change the sounds and it would bring the beat out alot more and give it more pop. The rapping was ok, not really my style though. Keep working homie

 

[yjvasco]

thanks man....back to the lab and work up some new sounds it is haha, ill keep that in mind

 

[SwagProductionz]

uh.. yea.,. lets go.. soounds like a cheesy intro.. i'd work on your voice beat is okay... i'd work on your voice and maybe lyrics.. your rapping about what everyone else on the radio is rapping about already feel me.. But anyway come check out my new wiz khalifa type beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...at-free-download-link-best-beat-board-483025/. i've produced for soulja boy/ honey cocaine/ lil b among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/SlurRty

 

[yjvasco]

Thanks for checking my music out bro...I get what ur sayin, hope u got the message... ill def check ur link

 

[d1gd33p]

drums sound good ... mix sounds good ... i feel odd about the main melody or what ever was layered on the melody ... but thats just me ... keep it up

check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ap-dirty-south-etc/f4f-new-track-pain-482732/

 

[yjvasco]

Thanks man, for sure...appreciate the feed

 

[apollobeats]

Beat was decent, pretty basic sounds but it still worked to some degree. Vocals were alright too, need to be mixed better and polished up more. I think with some practice and dedication you could get a lot better tho bro so keep at it and look forward to hearing more from you.

 

[yjvasco]

For sure bro...ill keep working on my sound, thanks for taking ur time to check me out, really appreciated