ABSOLUTELY FIRE PIANO BEAT! https://soundcloud.com/commandovg/tracks

[CommandoVG]

As you read in the title, check it out and tell me where I could improve. Always need tips
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[The Funk Junkie]

Nice man, I'd get rid of the gun shots in the beginning though it's pretty corny. The piano line is nice and the arrangement is really tight. The bass and kick go really hard but have a lot of rumbling and interference, I think messing with the sound design or mixing to really tighten up the low end and make it more focused would help out a lot. Overall, it's a nice beat. Just make sure you test it on some big speakers and really listen to that bottom end to see what you can do to make it really bang, good work!

 

[CommandoVG]

Thank you for trying it and especially giving me all these tips, they're all on my Workbook now!

 

[OGBama]

like The Funk Junkie said, drop the early to mid 00s gunshots as it is cliché.

 

[CommandoVG]

It was my first time using them as an experiment. I guess they'll be out of my other beats. Thank you!

 

[Vespucci]

Dope work man.. I'd just say work on the mix then its good too go. Stay grinding & Hungry

 

[CommandoVG]

Damn thank you! This time I'll try not to f*ck up the bass near the end. Stay Creative

 

[Vespucci]

No worries man, checkout my newest post if your down.