1st beat is tight. i like that piano you have, it could be louder though. that delay you have on the snare is pretty sick, i like the hi hats how it combines old school style bouncing velocity hats with trap rolls. this is a pretty solid beat overall. only things i recommend are making the piano louder and maybe changing the melody every so often
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