Is this the whole track or just a snippet. Like the sample. Um, kick is a little boxy but that can fixed with eq. Personally I would've use a totally different snare sample.
Pretty chill. IMO the cymbal sounds like it needs some reverb. And the gun shot feels like it comes a little too early, slightly off beat. I felt the turntable effect was a little offbeat as well the first time I listened through, but listening again it seems it may be ok. All in all, interesting style you're going for.