0hms - Verses Prod by Elliot Swayy F4F 100

OK, I see what you see about the stop and start, I will fix and re up..please disregard this thread for now
 
Kind of reminds me of 21 Savage. You do go off bit in a few bars here and there though. Your delivery is a bit too understated; sounds like you're trying not to wake your neighbours up at 1 am in the morning. You need to be more convincing... You need more energy on the mic.

Feedback on this please Carry On (F4F)
 
Nice track the instrumental is real nice I do like your flow on the beat but I agree with Somasu about the delivery of your vocals I think if you put more energy into the vocals they would sound a lot better but at the same time the way you delivered the vox on the track suits the laid back chilled style of the beat overall nice track just a lil more energy in your delivery.
 
Somasu said:
Kind of reminds me of 21 Savage. You do go off bit in a few bars here and there though. Your delivery is a bit too understated; sounds like you're trying not to wake your neighbours up at 1 am in the morning. You need to be more convincing... You need more energy on the mic.

Feedback on this please Carry On (F4F)
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Thanks for the feed, the delivery is more laid back to match the beat. Chilled laid back and slippery
 
HailCaesar said:
Nice track the instrumental is real nice I do like your flow on the beat but I agree with Somasu about the delivery of your vocals I think if you put more energy into the vocals they would sound a lot better but at the same time the way you delivered the vox on the track suits the laid back chilled style of the beat overall nice track just a lil more energy in your delivery.
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Thanks for the check, yes I gave a laid back low key delivery on this to match the mood. But at the end of both verses I do inject some energy. It's the vision I had for the song.
 
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