R&B Vocals Snippet

I like it a lot!
I think it could be better with more repetition though.
The 'so let me take you back to my place' definitely needs to be repeated.
Maybe you could repeat the whole thing, or take out the second part of the chorus and replace it with 'So let me take you back to my place'.
You could then use the bit you took out for another part of the song, or only include it in the second chorus to vary it from the first.
Nice work!
 
Hey Adge!

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it and I'm glad you like the track.

You've made some good points there and given me food for thought to get this finished up.

Thanks for the follow on Soundcloud too, I've just followed you back.
 
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