I really like the production on this one, I think the vocals sound fat and warm which works in the context that the song has no drums so makes up for that and also makes the singer sound closer/the vocals more personal and close. Great job.
Do some basic warm-ups before recording so you can get the full affect of your voice. This will help it carry through more. Breath through your nose to reduce vocal strain.
The vocals sound crisp, clear,and cut through really well. I think they came out great and go with the overall vibe of the track. Not bad at all considering it's your first time recording.