nice stuff, for some reason the vocals are coming out heavier through my left channel maybe that's on purpose. maybe a little more vocal tone quality on the bridge (where you move from rap to singing) - just to give a stronger textural shift. Nice drum beat - thick. not crazy bout the really low vocal - something seems off with pitch and it's sounds "thin". wish the convo stuff starting at 1:44 was a lot shorter - just took me outa the zone, but loved the way the beat dropped back in afterwards - really effective. wish the keys had just a hint more attack on the front half.
thanks for sharing