Constructive Criticism

[djtaynoel44]

What's going on FP? I've been producing for some years now and still working on building my brand. I just released an R&B beat and would like to know your opinion of it. All feedback is welcomed. Thanks!

"Forever Mine" https://soundcloud.com/djtaynoel/forever-mineprod-by-dj-tay-noelfree-dl-linkbuy

 

[Carter Nicholas]

not bad man, bass line could have been a bit more prevalent, maybe more character.

 

[djseip]

Hey DJ Taynoel,

i like the concept of the beat but i think in the mixing there is a lot to improve it still sounds very raw. The piano i would extend the notes to let them kling out a bit more and also add some more roomy verb in the background to place the piano better in the mix. also maybe using some stereo widener.

and i agree with Carter nicholas, your baseline is missing some character maybe try either a different plugin/preset or run the sound through a preamp to give it some more liveliness.

Hope that helps. keep up the creativity homie.