Chill Wavy SZA Vibes

The note your chord progression ends on is super unfulfilling, you need a different chord. Progressions have a particular grammar for how you structure the phrases. Also you need some variation. It's the same progression over and over. I like the sub when it's punching. Otherwise it's a little too much in there, sort of groaning when it goes on for too long, I like the birds and atmospherics. I think there needs to be more than technically correct things in there. You need to specialise in some instrument, whether keys, bass lines, beats. Centre your production around whichever and then do focus the dynamism of your tracks around your strength. As a vocalist, all my productions are just a vehicle for the lyrics and melodies I wanna try out. I centre everything around that. And I keep that moving and active and it leads the journey for the song.

i don't feel you tried to say anything in particular with this track and I think that's the most important thing that will impede the experience of listening to the track.

hope this is helpful!
 
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