i like the melody and the lo-fi fell to it, but i would reduce that effect on the drums to make them sit a bit more upfront and give it a bit more "bounce".
ME . Really dig this track. I love the swing on the drums and the sample you used is on point. I just put out a tape and a few of the songs have a lo-fi vibe with some more electronic elements. Check out this one i linked, as well as adorn and letmeluvu and lmk what you think! frankie says relax by teeoh | Free Listening on SoundCloud