The beat is tight broo....it does get kinda crowded in some parts but besides that its pretty dope... just add maybe an intro and some more breakdowns so it doesnt get so repetitive.....Other than that i enjoyed it man....Check out my new beat!
I didn't really see anything wrong with it. sounded a little naked on the verse maybe try some other varieties of sounds. switching up your drums would add a nice touch to it too
Strings :
Okay, the drums are dooope. The snare rolls and that deep ass bass are dope. The melody itself is cool sounding, works well with a rap beat. But i feel like the instruments used sounded too much like some cheap FL stock ****. The one synth you use in the beat, like at around 2:00 is dope. The vocal & the strings though could be better though.