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Thread: New Heat!!! "2 Straps" (INSTRUMENTAL) By Lyrickz (FEED4FEED)

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    New Heat!!! "2 Straps" (INSTRUMENTAL) By Lyrickz (FEED4FEED)

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    What's good? This is the latest track I've finished, critique as you please!
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    could def see drake on this track. like the main melody you used. The track is good but i would try to move away from using the orchestra hits just because it felt like it took away from the beat. at 1:56 and up till the 2:20 the beat was fire. but thats just my opinion. good shit nonetheless fam, check me out
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    i like this joint. like the person above, i would move away from the hits. other than that, nice work.

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    drums are tight, had me noddin my head from the beginning, snares could use some reverb or eq, sounds kinda dry, feel like it kinda needed more bass, like an 808 bumpin in the back, i think that would make it bang a lil harder, pretty good overall, had my head noddin through the whole thing, keep em comin, stay righteous

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    this is tight man. diggin the vibes. structure of the beat is good. the main melody is real nice as well. i agree with the comment above about the snare. thts my only complaint. other than tht good job on this man

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    Yo this shit is most definitely dope

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    those drums were crazzzzzy man

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    Real catchy. I like that synth you've got in there. Not bad, but I think the snare patterns & percussion could have been arranged a little better. Not bad work though homie.
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    dope shit. I'd bring in the orchestra hits at certain times instead of throughout the whole beginning. Since its presence in sound is greater, and since it's just changing a few notes, I start focusing it on that which makes the track a little monotonous. I do like the track when the orch stab goes out cuz you can really hear the rest of the things going on in the song. Good work but yea try and limit that orchestra hit to just the chorus. Sometimes less is more!

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    Juicy J and 2 Chainz would float on this. get those snares some high end, slightest reverb, light chorus and light delay on some of those background synths/melodies and it'd be dope

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