New headbanger "Cyber Shark 19" F4F

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By-Tor

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Just completed a new track. I tried to do something a bit new with this track, I tried to be more creative with the percussion giving a little bit of a big beat twist. How did it turn out? constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated. Just post a link to your track in your comment and I'll return the favor!

https://soundcloud.com/by-tor-1/cyber-shark-19
 
Bass is kinda over powering. I think a slight echo on the snare would fill the drums in nicely. Other than that it's pretty good. Click the link on my signature and return the favor. Thanks
 
Just completed a new track. I tried to do something a bit new with this track, I tried to be more creative with the percussion giving a little bit of a big beat twist. How did it turn out? constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated. Just post a link to your track in your comment and I'll return the favor!

https://soundcloud.com/by-tor-1/cyber-shark-19


Definitely different. The melody is nice. Personally, I prefer different drums and a bit more variety.

**Give YOUR opinion to a new track?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmusic/drake-draft-day-remix-feat-michael-joel
 
I like the raw base , it needs a song construction: intro-intrigue-chorus-bridge/drop-second intrigue-chorus-conclusion. All in 3-4 minutes. Listeners must get satisfaction. Keep going !
 
Just letting you guys know that I returned feedback to everyone that did the same for me. I really appreciate the advice and tips I'm getting, thank you, it's been a big help! :)
 
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