I wrote this song a few days ago and been modifying it since. I am open to any suggestions or things to make it better. At first it was too slow so I have sped it up since then, I want to add a bass line to it to give it more depth and shape ,does anyone else have any suggestion or see area that are lacking?
https://soundcloud.com/krzysa/id-002-final-v2
https://soundcloud.com/krzysa/id-002-final-v2