**** A Job(Keep Hustlin') [D3VON] Hit Me Up(Feedback Returned)

D3von

D3von

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Tell Me what u think bout this track. i'm tha rappa on the track, tell me wha i can do betta and what u like, of c i'll feed u if i haven't already.**** A Job (Keep Hustlin')

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As far as the track itself its coo, though I think there is some room for a subtle bassline. Also I would like to hear some hi hats for the hook to give it more bounce. I think if you work on it some more it will be much better, thanks for the feed.
 
Too F D said:
As far as the track itself its coo, though I think there is some room for a subtle bassline. Also I would like to hear some hi hats for the hook to give it more bounce. I think if you work on it some more it will be much better, thanks for the feed.
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hah i didn't make the that was rick rock, mainstream producer, i was rapping. ur welcome dogg, anytime.
 
Rappin is straight. I'm really not feelin those backing vocals. To be fair tho I don't really like backing vocals in almost any rap song. The ones in yours just don't sound like they match up with your rapping. The hook is tight tho. I don't really like the part where you use auto tune just doesn't match up with the beat. Youre definitely a talented rapper, i dont think you sound good with auto tune tho.
Hit me back https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=300703
 
Dj Dynamo said:
I'm really not feelin those backing vocals.
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Disclaimer: I normally don't listen very carefully to vocals. No disrespect to you, but frankly I just don't really care what people have to say.

Your verses are ok. Like Dynamo said, I'm not feeling the overdubs. You might try to record a few tracks of the entire verse and layer them, pan them left and right with the panned tracks at a lower volume, and see how that sounds with some over dubs over the top.

Hook is ok with the pitched down vocals, but definitely lose the auto tune. I don't like that at all.

You got a decent voice for rapping. Keep at it, try some new things while recording, and move along.

Peace!
 
Dj Dynamo said:
Rappin is straight. I'm really not feelin those backing vocals. To be fair tho I don't really like backing vocals in almost any rap song. The ones in yours just don't sound like they match up with your rapping. The hook is tight tho. I don't really like the part where you use auto tune just doesn't match up with the beat. Youre definitely a talented rapper, i dont think you sound good with auto tune tho.
Hit me back https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=300703
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Ayt i Feel You, imma hit u up now. and jay, i got u 2 man thnx 4 dat. BUMP!
 
listening now...you gots a good voice for rappin..the lyrics are pretty standard ya know nothing to stand out but nothing thats complete trash..lol @ autotune..its fun to begin with but nah..overall i can only really repeat what everyones said so good **** and keep it up..!!
 
hah i digg, i did used auto tune so it could sound a bit bettah since i can't sing fo ****. but good lookin dogg. MO FEED PLS!!
 
I like your flow. The hook is tight. I want you to stop calling yourself Dizzle though. hahaha.

I am really feelin the flow. Your timing is superb. I disagree with these guys, I would exploit the autotune. If you are doing it, do it big and make it a legitimate change in the song, throw several on there and do it full blown, not just like an effect you pot up for a few bars and then drop. I think it can add to it, but the current usage detracts
 
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