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[rblk26]

Hey just came up with this, I know it aint hot, I know it needs work. Just want to get some reaction to it.

 

[Jramos]

i don't know what to say about this beat, its not bad but not great either....It's in between ,...It just doesn't grab me, the melody is a little boring and the drums are pretty bland. I mean you could work on it, or just take elements from it into a new track. The biggest problem I found was that the instruments don't mesh well, they send different vibes lol

check out my thread
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261796

 

[slik3]

This beat wasnt all that bad but definitely does need some work....i just didnt like the drums at all but the piano with the strings was alright....u just might want to change the strings to some better ones....and i didnt like that synth u threw in there....but you could either change it to another instrument and fix the melody or just drop it...it wouldnt be that bad and just really change the drums....Other than that not that bad.....Check my new one!

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261817

 

[Sycopath7]

well with a LOT of work u cood make it decent, needs more of a chord progression you digg? it sounds a lil too basic if u ask me... and tha drum gotta long way to go 2, thro sum reverb on tha snare for one, and tha repettitive kick needs to be.. well.. less repetitive

id trash tha beat and take tha idea over to a new beat, but thats juss me

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=261999

 

[40C]

you're new to beatmaking?...honestly im not really feeling it