First beat using Ableton!Please Help!Feedback returned!

[bcwarlock]

So normally I make beats on an SP404 sampler and don't use software until after the beat is done...this is my first go doing an entire beat in Ableton...to get used to the sound I even used a recording of tape hiss to simulate my 4track I use to bounce samples from the 404 to haha!Here it is any help you can give is needed and appreciated..I will return your feedback as well!

 

[bcwarlock]

Had to reupload this ....

 

[bcwarlock]

Had rere upload bc the track kept cutting out at the end..but I think its fixed now

 

[bcwarlock]

Fixed it finally..damn Abletons confusing that way!

 

[Son USEd Joint]

Sample is not bad. But you need much more punchy drums. And slower hi-hats I think. Adding some reeverb could be useful too. Also I don't hear lows at all.
Keep it up and make more!

 

[bcwarlock]

Sample is not bad. But you need much more punchy drums. And slower hi-hats I think. Adding some reeverb could be useful too. Also I don't hear lows at all.
Keep it up and make more!

Thanks man I will!

 

[Donta Black]

Yea not a bad sample and a nice start for hoping into Abelton, I would say mess around with another drum pattern, I also agree the hi hats are a bit too fast in this case, but still this has a lot of potential. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../ngfl-nice-guys-finish-last-5-12-14-a-476437/