First beat ever!!

[Ihloo]

First off excuse my english, i'm from Costa Rica

Now; like the topic say is my first beat, is not masterized cause i don't know about masterizing,

i made it in 15 minutes, i've been using FL Studio since January, so i'm looking for critics and advices

/share.cfm?id=10600234

I Still don't have the 20 post required, so just add the SOUNDCLICK.COM to the link

 

[bigdemo]

i like the drums

 

[Ihloo]

1st beat

[MP3]http://www.soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10600234[/MP3],

here is the track, I Still don't know how to use soundclick properly

 

[erocdar]

It sounded like I was playing Metroid.

 

[Major W]

yeah drums sounded nice but u I think u should start thickening up the track with like counter melodies n chords or whatever. Like maybe some crazy stac violin to follow that melody or something then have some other strings under it. I hear u slyly have some strings in there but they really quiet like?
keep it up bro!

any feedback you got would be appeciated!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...*zero*-all-feed-returned-367822/#post49123262

 

[ChrisF.Beats]

good drums , too repetitive.. a beat shouldnt take you 15 minutes, you should take your time perfecting it, adding drops and different layers.. i know some people think it takes skill to make a beat in 15 minutes, but people who know better will take hours perfecting a beat.. Never the less this was very good considering its your first beat! Keep it up, if you can pick it up that fast I'm sure you can get nice

 

[provided]

I like the drums aswell, but to be honest I don't like your synth. I agree with erocdar
. Sounds like a tetris game or something. Go play around with some new sounds and try to combine chords with some riffs etc etc. Good luck with your new hobby. Don't give up

 

[BeeNyce]

at first i was like -____- but then the drums kicked in and i was like

better than my first beat...keep it up