Good lead and melody but I think the notes at 0:4 & 0:14 has too much vibrato/pinch bend. Nice drums at :22, gives it a hip-hop touch. 0:50 sounds like an actual mario kart track, just work on the mixing a little bit more. 1:22 - 1:30 , that was nice. You have versatility, which is something people here lack, you also have the potential to create good melodies.
If you have the time please check out my track , thank you.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-house-dance/beach-vibe-531434/#post50030645
