Very first attempt at making cinematic scoring type stuff, what y'all think?

[MuurKaNāga¹³]

So I was just messing around with some strings, and this came about. Wasn't really planning on making film score type music, but I kinda liked it so decided 2 share, what y'all think? I know it could use some variations, maybe I'll work more on developing this track into a full composition at some point. Thanks in advance for the feedback.

 

[mebitek]

hi,
for me sounds good.
maybe you need to give more stereo space and of course more variations and articulations cause the whole melody is repeating to much and can appear a little boring.
keep it going

 

[MuurKaNāga¹³]

thx for the feedback!