Myrical Lyfe
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Whats up guys? This is my 2nd remix ever. So id like to get some tips on what I could do better, as Im sure there is some! Leave some links, and follow me so i can hear some of your tracks as well!
Zayn - Pillowtalk (Myrical Lyfe RMX)
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Hey man, nice chilled vibe you're going for but I think quite a few things are missing.
- I would've loved if you had included a bassline, especially after the drop at 1:08.
- Your buildup bass drum sounds like it wants to go faster near the drop but doesn't - kind of anti climactic. Also, that style of buildup didn't feel right, it's the kind of buildup for a harder dance track.
- There's little to no variation throughout the song; it's the same ambient sounding synths in the background the whole way through (apologies if this is what you're aiming for). I'm not sure of the genre so I may be chatting s*** but I feel like it needed clear choruses and verses.
- The fading in white noise gets too loud
- At 2:09, you've just mis-timed the drums early by around a second but it's too noticeable and slightly ruins the clean drop.
Keep it up though, followed you on Soundcloud! If you have time I'd love your feedback on my remix here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-love-me-bootleg-remix-bass-house-f4f-533689/
-ORVA
- I would've loved if you had included a bassline, especially after the drop at 1:08.
- Your buildup bass drum sounds like it wants to go faster near the drop but doesn't - kind of anti climactic. Also, that style of buildup didn't feel right, it's the kind of buildup for a harder dance track.
- There's little to no variation throughout the song; it's the same ambient sounding synths in the background the whole way through (apologies if this is what you're aiming for). I'm not sure of the genre so I may be chatting s*** but I feel like it needed clear choruses and verses.
- The fading in white noise gets too loud
- At 2:09, you've just mis-timed the drums early by around a second but it's too noticeable and slightly ruins the clean drop.
Keep it up though, followed you on Soundcloud! If you have time I'd love your feedback on my remix here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-love-me-bootleg-remix-bass-house-f4f-533689/
-ORVA
Myrical Lyfe
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Hey man, nice chilled vibe you're going for but I think quite a few things are missing.
- I would've loved if you had included a bassline, especially after the drop at 1:08.
- Your buildup bass drum sounds like it wants to go faster near the drop but doesn't - kind of anti climactic. Also, that style of buildup didn't feel right, it's the kind of buildup for a harder dance track.
- There's little to no variation throughout the song; it's the same ambient sounding synths in the background the whole way through (apologies if this is what you're aiming for). I'm not sure of the genre so I may be chatting s*** but I feel like it needed clear choruses and verses.
- The fading in white noise gets too loud
- At 2:09, you've just mis-timed the drums early by around a second but it's too noticeable and slightly ruins the clean drop.
Keep it up though, followed you on Soundcloud! If you have time I'd love your feedback on my remix here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-love-me-bootleg-remix-bass-house-f4f-533689/
-ORVA
I have bass in there, just maybe not present enough? Ill take all your critique into the next mix! And I will check yours out now.