ZachPayne - Crystal Sky [Melodic Dubstep] (Feedback for feedback)

[ZachPayne]

Hello everyone,

I have a new track released and would like your feedback to improve my future productions. I will gladly return any feedback if you want to link your song/thread. Feel free to comment on any aspect and be as harsh as you like, as long as its helpful. Hopefully you enjoy it as well. Thanks.

YouTube
Or if you prefer Soundcloud links
ZachPayne - Crystal Sky by Zach Payne | Free Listening on SoundCloud

- ZachPayne

 

[AInclan]

This is really good! I think that the mixing/mastering is top notch, everything sounds clean and concise. The only thing I could think of that could improve the track would be to add some variations to the lead when it repeats around 2:26. More specifically, I would add some higher notes on top of the chords that were already established in order to give a sense of progression. Again, great work.

 

[ZachPayne]

Thank you for listening and giving me some suggestions. Much appreciated!

 

[DontSmokeMate]

Overall I think this is a great track! I love the atmospheric feel you've got going on, I especially love the change at around 1:37; you used a beautiful lead over the top of the subtle keys and the melody works really well with the chord progression which all put together gives a great impact. There really isn't anything bad I can say about it, even the dirty wobbles sound really clean.
But yeah, great job. I think I'll be learning a thing or two from your music.

 

[ZachPayne]

Well thanks so much! Hopefully you enjoy and pick up a few tricks from listening!

 

[rolist]

Sounds very clean, nice comfortable sidechain-work.

It wouldnt hurt with much louder vocals on this one though.
Also I think it would be cool to hear it with a not so soft kick, although it sounds good as it is - just my opinion!