WIP Track feedback needed [F4F]

[el3v8or]

Hey guys, been working on this one for longer than I wanna admit and need some fresh ears on it. Any and all thoughts are GREATLY appreciated!! F4F just leave the link in your comment and I will return the favor! -edit oh man! I forgot the link here it is. Artifacts by el3v8or | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[mihail-suvorov]

Hey! Excuse me, but where is a link of this one?

 

[el3v8or]

Oops, I totally forgot about it since I posted this right before going to bed, thanks for letting me know!

 

[mihail-suvorov]

Hey! A good composition, very expressive, happy, but your main problem is balance. And why didnt you make the compression? Sounds are really good, but the balance spoils everything.

Decide for yourself by Some M. | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Good luck!

 

[el3v8or]

Sounds really good man! Love the change over at 1:05 and I feel like that part has a ton of room to grow, the song goes into the build up at 1:32 too soon. For a song under 3 minutes a 30 second intro and 30 second build up is a lot of time spent not on the fun parts. But it has a lot of space and good ideas to evolve and build on! Production sounds really good to me!