What is wrong with this one?

[rolist]

Hi! I am new in the mixing-game - and would love some feedback on this song.

Do you have any specific tips to make it cleaner?


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[Tristan Carmichael]

The whole mix sounds quite lo fi and mono. Not sure if that's what you wanna go for. Snare has a very low freq that's bothering me. I understand you're wanting that warmth on the snare but perhaps compress that freq or just cut. Also, kick is very soft. Personally if you going to go with that kind of beat, need the kick to shine through. Check out some videos on youtube about freq masking. It will help your kick and snare sit well together.

 

[Happy_jay_123]

The kick definitely needs more power. It does sound like mono so you might wanna widen it up. This track is fire though.

 

[Aung Myat Paing]

Too many low frequencies that needs to be cleared out I suppose ?