Tech house song with 8-bit elements, hoping for some feedback! (F4F)

[Spugenhagen]

This is my latest song and I would like to get some feedback other than my cat's so please check out and comment, thanks!


https://soundcloud.com/hypnotengu/techno-monks-8-bit-ceremony

 

[Fujiwara]

Cool track. I couldn't really hear the clap/snare too well, boosting around 200 hz with an eq really helps the body of the snare cut through. Other than that, just more practice and keeping at it will help your whole sound come together. Keep making music and posting for feedback. It's one of the best ways to get better.

If you want to give me some feedback :
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rywhere-vocals-tell-me-what-you-think-528650/

 

[bchander]

Nice synth in the back. The drums are really good here, very prominent. I might incorporate some hiatus since it's a techno track - would give the track some overall flair, as well. Overall, sounds kind of spooky and it's well done.
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[Spugenhagen]

The snares, hmm, I haven't been listening the drums closely enough and that is not the only track that neglects the snares... that was a good point, thanks!

 

[totta]

hey, just checked out the track. I really like some of the sounds you have created, particularly the opening synth/ delay stuff. However, i feel some of the drums/ synth sounds are a little bit too simple which is having an overall affect of pulling the quality down for the whole track. If i were you i would start to layer all of your sounds up so you end up with thicker/ fuller synth sounds. This should add weight and balance to the track. Hope that helps! Keep up the good work

 

[Spugenhagen]

I absolutely agree with you, I was too hasty with the track and that left it pretty hollow and unfinished. Indeed, layering would probably help, thanks for the tip!

 

[DJMSherman]

like the vibe, not sure if im liking the kick along with the perc elements.... track seems kind of flat, could be spectrum/octave freq