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    This song Chronicles my depression = ANY FEED RETURNED - Gotta Do it

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    emotionally inspired. Any feed is returned asap, thx alot

    ' got do it'

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    You need to work on your mix. The chopped vocals are too loud and sound off tune at some points.

    Too noisy around 100-400 h. EQ the chords and make a proper bass.

    Nice soundesign but it lacks a cohesive structure.

    Hope it helps.

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    Yeah, nice song but what johnroy already mentioned the vocals are a bit to loud and somewhat out off tune.
    I think the guitar is to dry, maybe add some delay/reverb on that.

    It's not my style but it sounds unique so that's a good thing!!

    Gr.

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    hey there, returning feedback

    the vocal thing in the beginning and 1:24 sounds somewhat dissonant with the other things, I would pitch it differently or just use something else

    as said above, you could work on arrangement a bit more, your sounds are pretty decent, only take more time putting them together,

    keep it up

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    Thanks for my feedback, I can only echo the above comments and I would say to work on your mixing and mastering.
    You need to give everything in your mix its own space and eq the low end off your leads and so on, so not to muddy the mix.
    Use a spectrum analyser (voxengo span is good and free) to get visual feedback of your mix and you can see where your
    instruments sit in the frequency spectrum and tweak it. also play tracks through the analyser that you like to see where they place their
    instruments and the volumes they play at etc.

    Good luck

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    good universe and ideas work but need to be enginered

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    seems like your missing octaves in this mix. Seems like the vocal can be a higher octave, as well as the drums have more saturation....I don't know....but it seems like it can be better, which is a good thing! cheers!

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    Song would have been cooler without the choppy vocal thing. Drums need to be louder.

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