Damn! Really digging the old-school kinda vibe.
Track could use some good vocals.
I think the emotions from the start of the song should blend a little better into the moment the kick starts, maybe next to the white noise sweep at bar 8 put something like a reversed reverb shot from a synth, maybe from the bass synth or something.
Absolutely love the guitar.
There are a lot of parts in this track that catch my attention.
However there's something wrong with the vocals in the second part, to me they sound out of key.
Hope I helped,
- Walter Slewis