Shadow's wind - EDM/Progressive

[tomhold]

Hi, i am not an EDM producer but I am working in a radio oriented project, this was a track I made a couple years ago, I made some improvements on the mix.
But it is still not perfect. I would appreciate any kind of feedback or comments.

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/the-madsoul/shadows-wind/s-5nln3

 

[MrsWester]

the pads/synths/violins and bass are great. I really like this song. The kick and drums needs more "oomph"

 

[Dirty32]

Hi!
(I'm writing while I'm listening)
The intro is nice, the build up that begins at 1:15 needs more precision imo and the drop is really good. Maybe you should use more drum elements to bring some more variations (every 8 bars). I'm not into those pinball toms. The break is a nice idea but it could be better executed. I repeat that the build ups need more work. The 2nd needs something more than the 1st.
You may think I'm a bit harsh but I only wrote about the things I'll do. Other than that it's a solid work, I think you're way better at the keyboard than at the drums!
Cheers!

 

[tomhold]

Thanks, fair enough. I know I have to work much better the drums, and definitely improve the breaks.

 

[Ferione]

the pads/synths/violins and bass are great. I really like this song. The kick and drums needs more "oomph"

Hi!
(I'm writing while I'm listening)
The intro is nice, the build up that begins at 1:15 needs more precision imo and the drop is really good. Maybe you should use more drum elements to bring some more variations (every 8 bars). I'm not into those pinball toms. The break is a nice idea but it could be better executed. I repeat that the build ups need more work. The 2nd needs something more than the 1st.
You may think I'm a bit harsh but I only wrote about the things I'll do. Other than that it's a solid work, I think you're way better at the keyboard than at the drums!
Cheers!

I have not much to add other than to say i agree with this. The idea is very nice though!