Rip apart this- Bloodponds.

Jeeezus, you're doing own thing man; Not any easy piece to critique, definitely unique. A few things to consider; Try some subtle (or aggressive) filter sweeps on leads to add some depth, as well maybe try some attack automation on leads for variety. I don't think the scratch samples (and I've spent the better part of a decade as a scratch dj), are complimenting the tune; maybe just a case of the "out of the box sound". Overall don't be shy about spending time crafting individual sounds (sample, synth, preset, init patch....). Spit, polish, drag it through the dirt, rinse and repeat as desired.
 
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