very lit! i get your vision, with what your trying to achieve. My feedback would be to make it more original, try to develop your own sound more since it sounds similar to a lot of stuff out there.
ya, when i think of proper dub, i think of the low end, not the high end noise. it's a very square song, not a lot of creativity. The entire intro was the same thing on repeat. and I couldn't last for a few seconds into the drop. lol definitely some wonky brostep, nothing dub about it.