Hi, first feedback I'm writing here, and I'm kind of new. I picked this track because I like its genre.
I would say the "stereo bass" is a bit too noisy/gritty. I would add reverb as well.
The break is a bit empty. I think it's ok to have just one or two elements as long as it sounds big (an example I like for that is the beginning of Alan Walker Fade).
Otherwise good track idea but needs more caffeine and tweaking the sound to make it bigger.
