Good job mate its seems you know how to mix well.
I think you should make your second break a little bit diffrenet then what you used in your first break to make it sound more interesting also try to pick more original sound for your drop synth because everybody already used those supersaw your using.
I'd recommend you to try comparing your tracks to other big tracks that alredy was released if you want to take your music to the next level and be able to sign tracks with labels.
Just pick a good track that you love put it in your daw on some channel while your working on your project and compare your sound to them and then do what it takes to reach their levels.
Good luck !
