0:40 you should really work on that pluck's reverb or add a little bit of delay, just a thought.
Wow the drop hit like a ****ing truck pulling 10 more trucks, maybe you should combine your drop with a progression over to the drop, right now you have two totally different projects in my opinion.
Really like the drop, but yeah you should try and weld them better together, try making a real intense snare roll buildup with some pew pew pew lazer uplifters
for the drop or something something
id give 6/10, keep up the good work!