New track called "Child of Mine" for your critique :)

The melody and harmonie is fine, nice for a sunny day. But nevertheless there is somethinh more fire i missed.
Go your way, Iam sure you will learn more and more..:)
 
Really like what's going on here. The track has a lot of motion in it! The main piano and other sounds fit really well together! I think I'd personally add slightly more effect on the main vocals.
The person who is singing has a slightly monotonous voice and I feel that is done deliberately to add melancholy/emotional tension to the song. He kind of sounds like a sad robot or inhuman being. Perhaps you could make his voice stand out slightly more, by adding a little bit more effect to it. But hey, that's only my opinion. It's your track, you make it awesome! Keep up the good work!
 
FNKSHNL said:
Really like what's going on here. The track has a lot of motion in it! The main piano and other sounds fit really well together! I think I'd personally add slightly more effect on the main vocals.
The person who is singing has a slightly monotonous voice and I feel that is done deliberately to add melancholy/emotional tension to the song. He kind of sounds like a sad robot or inhuman being. Perhaps you could make his voice stand out slightly more, by adding a little bit more effect to it. But hey, that's only my opinion. It's your track, you make it awesome! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for your feedback mate its much appreciated :)
 
Mixing/mastering is spot on I'd say. After nearly 5 years I'm only now learning how to do that stuff. :S
Is that you singing? That takes some guts. Lol I have to say though, I think it would be a lot nicer if it had trance style female vocals.
Overall, cool stuff buddy! I really dig the synths and melody!

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Song writing is fine, all I could think was that the transitions maybe needed some drum fills, even the part at :58 or 1:58 with the pitched down vocals, I think either no drums or some sort of fill would've added much more umph to it, but that's just my opinion
 
LickBasil said:
Song writing is fine, all I could think was that the transitions maybe needed some drum fills, even the part at :58 or 1:58 with the pitched down vocals, I think either no drums or some sort of fill would've added much more umph to it, but that's just my opinion
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Thanks mate, all opinions welcome and all help to improve our work. thanks again :)
 
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