Sloooow chord progression in the beginning, but I count it under artistic freedom.
The mix sounds to me highly compressed, could be a little reduced for my ears.
Solid song structure and nice choice of melodies
Wish there were more melodies in this track.
This track seems to have no low end almost, also the fx or the rides I don't know what it is.
Is taking over the whole track.
Maybe turn it down atleast and add a subbass
I like idea's, would be great if you could make it a bit more work!
Edit: Ur bass seems lower then I probably can hear with my ears lol.
Lower down the rides pls !
Love the push of the bass in the beginning. For me personally, I feel that there might be a bit too much mid range. That muddiness. Its just bringing out some unwanting freq in my ears. I love the melodies though. You...that bass!
As someone else stated, the ride hat's fx feedback is extremely constant and is distracting. My other suggestion is to add lead synths, this track sounds like someone decided to bypass the lead synths and solo'ed the rhythmic elements.