Sound like a good idea for a track. I think you should work on your baseline, and replace your kick in the drop. It's very important to have alot of sound in the midrange to get the drop punchy and energetic. Keep working on that and you will see wonders happen! Keep it up
Btw, it's much more convinient for others to give feedback if we can just click a link (soundcloud, wavo, youtube or whatever) instead of downloading a file.
