New music, any feedback? :)

[KLNKY]

Yoo! It's been a while since I have been on here but I was wondering if you guys could review my new song "future"? It has alot of Don Diablo vibes in the first drop, but in the second it goes a bit more Jay Hardway. Hopefully you guys enjoy

The song - Future [Coming Soon] by Tereki | Tere ki | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[SawCeeJack]

starts out intense, but gets a little goofy-sounding

 

[KLNKY]

starts out intense, but gets a little goofy-sounding

In what way may I ask?

 

[raudelan]

I think the lead introduced at 1:00-ish is too loud compared to the drums.

I guess it is on purpose, but the second part of the song is so different from the first part that it felt like it was two different songs.

 

[Aerober]

The melody and the bass sound nice. The drums are sounding really good.
But I feel like the song needs some mixing fixes, the lead from the first drop is too loud compared to the drums.
And at 1:45 when it goes to the second part of the song, i feel it is too disconnected. It's almost like if one song ended, and another one started.
Probably some FXs would fix that.

 

[SawCeeJack]

In what way may I ask?

It starts to sound like a fart, or kinda honky-tonky. I would ditch that part of the song and expand on the first minute.