New Deep House Track - 'Love is a Way' - F4F

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Hi,

Here is a new deep house track that I have recently made. The whole song is based around a nice old school style piano house riff with some nice vocals accompanying it. The track has not been mastered yet because I want to get some feedback about my mixing etc. before I fork out on mastering. The last track I posted here didn't receive one piece of feedback :( (it no longer exists), even after leaving feedback for other people, so I would really appreciate some this time. I will always return feedback if you leave me some.

The track:



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Thanks for the feedback on my track mate!

Sad to hear that you didn't get any previous feedback. If that track was on par with this I figure it was just bad luck.
Cause this is a real great track with a very nice groove to it. Granted, I wouldn't call it "Deep House".
I am not one to be picky about genres but if you don't want to be missleading I would call this "Soulful House" or simply house if you prefer that.

As for the mixing and structure I think it's pretty neat overall. The vocals could be a bit softer? Maybe some de-esser and more basscut and reverb?
It's a preference thing I guess. Also, I feel like the clap could be bigger and jucier.

I definetly appreciate what you're doing so keep up the great work!
 
OldestManInTheWorld said:
Thanks for the feedback on my track mate!

Sad to hear that you didn't get any previous feedback. If that track was on par with this I figure it was just bad luck.
Cause this is a real great track with a very nice groove to it. Granted, I wouldn't call it "Deep House".
I am not one to be picky about genres but if you don't want to be missleading I would call this "Soulful House" or simply house if you prefer that.

As for the mixing and structure I think it's pretty neat overall. The vocals could be a bit softer? Maybe some de-esser and more basscut and reverb?
It's a preference thing I guess. Also, I feel like the clap could be bigger and jucier.

I definetly appreciate what you're doing so keep up the great work!
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Hi,

I have taken your feedback into consideration and I have released an updated version now.

I was having a hard time softening the vocals because I felt that the piano became too overpowering if I did so. However, I did some slight de-essing to the vocals as the sibilance was coming through too much within the mix. It isn't a major change but there is definitely a slight difference. With this track I didn't want to cake my vocals in reverb but I did give a bit more release to it.

Regarding the clap, I was personally contempt with it but I did increase some of the high mids just to give it a bit more body.

Deep house was a bit misleading so I have just tagged it as 'House'.

Here is the updated track:

Any more feedback would be great from both you and anyone else who is reading this.
 
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I listened to the updated version, it sounds pretty old school with the piano and bring back a familiar vibe to me, I like that! :) Keep up the good work
 
This is a great track! If I had to make any changes, I'd maybe start with just the drums and then bring in the strings before the breakdown, add a little fill at the 13 sec mark and keep the vocals centered for the verse and spread wide for the chorus. The mix sounds great. Good luck!

Peace \/
chisel316
 
I like the drums and the oldschool piano! The vocals are probably a bit too cheesy, but thats just my taste, they still sound good! For the mix I'd prefer the drums and bass a little bit more upfront, as they sound a little weak. Still a nice track!
 
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