EQ out the lowest frequencies on that kick because the sub-bass on those kicks are muddying the entire rest of the track. Also maybe turn those string sections down a bit and play with the eq on some of the mid levels on them because they tend to ring in my ears a bit. (Possibly the 250-500 Hz range. I think that's what it is but I could be wrong, but if you play around with the EQ eventually you'll find the ringing might go away). This track has so much potential once the mixing is reworked. Good stuff and keep it up.
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