My First Upbeat! Did I Fail?

[HanzBeats]

Hey yall! All feedback is good feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/somestyfff/cooooold

 

[pinder325]

I like it! wish it was longer!

My new track - https://soundcloud.com/chris-pinder-514889758/the-popular-entertainer

 

[Mandoogles]

Yeah i gotta say i like it wish it was longer as well. haha

 

[Wobby]

this is so good really future;followed you on soundcloud i like your stuff

 

[Soul Of Seun]

Really nuanced here; like the hats and kick on this one. Very solid job.

 

[HanzBeats]

Thanks bro! Much love

 

[crazy_canadian]

I'm lovin it! This sounds tight! wish it was longer!
Deffo not a fail!

Keep up the good work,,
K

 

[HanzBeats]

I like it! wish it was longer!

My new track - https://soundcloud.com/chris-pinder-514889758/the-popular-entertainer

I'll try to make it longer! Thanks

 

[b_murray]

Love it. Sweet relaxing tune, can't wait for the long version. Sounds great on my Rokit-5s and KRK Sub, all the elements have a good amount space around them in the mix.

I feel like the background running synth could be a little more crisp, maybe even automated so the crispness comes in and out at strategic moments.

 

[HanzBeats]

Yeah i gotta say i like it wish it was longer as well. haha

haha thank you man. I'll get on it

 

[Thijs Jansen]

I can hear a slightly distorted sound coming from the kick.
Now the thing is I have no idea if you did it on purpose or you got a kick from a sample pack and it was already like that.
I'm not a big fan of this style so the only thing I can tell you is reduce the kick's gain or volume.

 

[HanzBeats]

this is so good really future;followed you on soundcloud i like your stuff

Thanku!!!