The buildup is good. I think the vocals need to be EQ'ed in the high end a little - they sound a little piercing. Overall, good start to production.
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This isn't bad for a first track. Actually a lot of good ideas. A lot of the sounds sound really cheesy or stock, with practice this should be fixed.
This is reallyyy good for your first track, if I listen back to mine I want to slap myself haha
For a first track, this is really promising. The mixing could be a lot better since it sounds really muffled (needs more high end) and the bass is kinda missing, but I guess I did the same mistakes when I started producing. Anyways gj for a first track! Keep on making tracks, you'll get better by the time
I thought it was really good for a first production!
I'm in the same boat, having finished my first track recently. The advice I'm getting is to just keep going - and that you tend to get into your stride after around 20 finished tracks (which is what I'm aiming for).
Out of interest, did you do the vocals yourself?
The vocals are from Taylor swift's single blank space, I just chopped and re arranged them
Just curious - did you get the vocals from an acapella site, or did you extract them from the original track?
I got the vocals from acapella4u website
Pretty good for a first track. I'd change the snare/clap tho, it doesn't fit quite good IMO.
Nice one, some great audio manipulation