My first track

I like the composition. It's very funky and a good song. Having a good song is to me key! Yes, there are high frequencies that tire the ear, check for and remove whistling frequencies in the upper range on the glider key synth and the arp synth. I can't answer your question about bit rate though.
 
Are you sure this is your "first" song? Lol
The arrangement sounds really good, everything fits well together.
As for your frequencies problem, try exporting in 24Bit wav. I find my Soundcloud uploads sound better using that format.

Thorns by glitch | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Yes, i'm sure. I didn't upload tracks before. Thanks for the feedback!


About "Thorns"
You need to work with an idea of the track. Idea is a synthesizers (what they mean in the music), a melody and a harmony. Sounds must to be alive, they need a breath. I think that's the main mistake.

Good luck!
 
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